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That I am
Contributed by
vanilla_flame
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:09:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A black rose, that I am
as dark as the night
and cold as the December wind.
A white dove, that I am
giving peace to those
who need it.
A brown hyenak, that I am
spreading laughter
throughout the land.
A silver tear, that I am
releasing pain
from those who suffer.
A hot iron, that I am
smoothing out the wrinkles
in your life.
This is only half of who
I am.
The other half is a
shadow, waiting
to be revealed...
Copyright ©
vanilla_flame
... [
2005-02-01 21:09:42]
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Re: That I am
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:11:34 PM AEST
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| that was the greatest ending, greater than anything i could think of, 2 me it means that no one actually knows everything about a person, they can know them 4 years but not really know who they are, keep up the good writing! and thats juss how i took it, i dont know how you meant for it to be taken |
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Re: That I am
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:49:01 PM AEST
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this is lovely, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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