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Bloody Smiley Face
Contributed by
gimpie
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The needle shines so nicely The skin is beautifully bare The blood is flowing red And the smiley face is there
To lose the man I love Because he's ready for much more Comittment I can't fathum And that shakes me to the core
Now my face has no smile And my heart is broke in two But thanks to wrist and needle My bloody smile......smiles through.
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Re: Bloody Smiley Face
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:49:58 PM AEST (User
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Nice write & flow! TD |
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Re: Bloody Smiley Face
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:54:38 PM AEST (User
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Sad write. But it has an awesome flow. |
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