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Failed Agression
Contributed by
neveryours
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't tell me I'm crazy -
words hiss and sputter
wet spittle and ugly intention
Gather in mouth corners
with a little bit of cornbread left
From a lifeless supper
Don't you know who I am?
(don'tyouknowwhoIwishIwas)
Threatens to dismantle
This already precarious
balance of real
And make believe.
Skies shift and fog lifts
sweet smiles and apologies
Hands kissed and sobs for understanding
I'm tired, weak from loss and
DON"TYOUWALKAWAY
Idle threats from powerless fingers
crumbling words in limp attempts
to wield this nothing talent
Firing blank shots and
Cry because
Alone is all encompassing
And laughing at your
Failure.
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2005-02-01 23:20:02]
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Re: Failed Agression
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:29:52 PM AEST
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| I feel a lot of anger here, you sound like you have some issues. I wish you peace. |
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Re: Failed Agression
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:21:11 AM AEST
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| or..bleeding inwardly and in pain.. waiting for just the right moment and the right excuse to slit her wrists....again |
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Re: Failed Agression
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:38:55 AM AEST
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I can relate very well.
This got to me.
There's a lot of pure feeling, real emotion in this write..
I can feel it. |
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Re: Failed Agression
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:57:28 AM AEST
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| grand. encompassed by 'alone'. that's such a good term. |
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