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Beauty
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My soul is gone
No reason to go on
Any longer
Your my fuel
For my Hatred
My life is void
No point in being toyed with
Any longer
Your my tool
For my Hatred
And now I'll take it
Pool of blood
Pain of hate
Insain
And lasting
To hell with
Destiny
****
Fate...
FAKE
I try to wake up
But I'm dead...
It's too late
You took my life
While Blinded by
Your Beauty
I hate you
That creates hatred
For your beauty
But I loved you
Guess I was hated
Guess I was'nt enough
Guess I was fated
To die by your beauty
Painted in red blood
I guess this is what you love
Never my disire
But my Death
Stained as you turned
And left
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-02 00:10:40]
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Re: Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:26:43 AM AEST
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| There's so much intense emotion in this write. It's very powerful. Excellent work. |
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Re: Beauty
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:07:45 AM AEST
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| very intense and deep. |
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Re: Beauty
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:53:38 AM AEST
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Sad but written with beauty from the soul.
It's a masterpeice 'cause most folks can relate.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Beauty
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:56:46 AM AEST
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you wrote with such tender emotion on a very sad subject and made it all come to life. Keep up the good work
Michelle |
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Re: Beauty
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:39:31 AM AEST
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What a dark sad write, very nicely done.
Great write.
Jane x |
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Re: Beauty
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:05:46 PM AEST
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| very different than all of your other poems. hatred needs no fuel, it needs the object to hate. |
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Re: Beauty
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by CurtisC on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:37:19 AM AEST
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wow, could feel the emotion steaming off of that one! great job!
Curtis |
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Re: Beauty
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by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:27:34 PM AEST
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| I didn't know you could write something that deep almost makes me want to cry |
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