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The Days End
Contributed by
taurusgem1
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Yesterday
In the drowning of the sun
The clouds became fire torching the sky
Dissolving into the black ash
The world hushed and quietly grew restless
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2005-02-02 02:16:27]
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Re: The Days End
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:07:52 AM AEST
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Interesting.
I liked the contrast in the last line-
'The world hushed and quietly grew restless'
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Re: The Days End
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by Katiebird on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:50:30 PM AEST
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Favorite line:
In the drowning of the sun
Powerful. |
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