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Flat-line
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:12:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She can feel the hate around her,
She knows who it is,
Everything inside is such a blur,
Why do these people do this.
Day after day wishing life would end,
She shouldn't be treated bad,
Yet there's nothing we can do she wants to be dead,
Nobody to rely on but her cheating dad.
Her mother has passed and her father's not there,
She needs a shoulder to cry on,
She sometimes pulls out her hair,
And wants the world to be gone.
Nobody really noticed she was sad until that one day,
That her mind completely snapped,
And she tried to take her life away,
She felt that everyone looked at her and clapped.
Now if she only had a chance left,
Maybe things would get better,
To her sadness we are deaf,
That's what it said in that letter.
"Goodbye for now i'll see you soon".....
~Kay-Kay
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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2005-02-02 14:12:13]
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Re: Flat-line
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:13:10 PM AEST
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very sad and tragic, a real pained write
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Re: Flat-line
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by redtempest13 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:37:51 PM AEST
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Deeply sad, but a very good write.
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