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Numb
Contributed by
Ataraxia
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:53:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Stirring emotions inside of me Like theyre ingredients to my being Boiling inside of me, chaos to the extreme I want to let them go, I long to set them free
If only I didnt care what you said to me That would make everything so easy It would be perfect to be senseless and indifferent It would be much better if I were just unconcious
So Ill close my eyes This posion is the sweetest Ill ever taste And when I awake Ill be happy, lifeless, my spirit replaced And I will never feel Another useless tear falling down my face Ill sell my soul to nothingness All my fears I will have chased away
I just want to feel numb Cut away from this world I just want to be paralyzed I dont want all these thrills
I just want to stop trembling I need to stand still I want to rid of my tears I dont ever want to feel again
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Ataraxia
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2005-02-02 16:53:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Numb
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mortis-Dark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST (User
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One of the best poems I have saw in a LONG time. I loved these Three stanzas.
"Stirring emotions inside of me
Like they’re ingredients to my being
Boiling inside of me, chaos to the extreme
I want to let them go, I long to set them free
If only I didn’t care what you said to me
That would make everything so easy
It would be perfect to be senseless and indifferent
It would be much better if I were just unconcious
So I’ll close my eyes
This posion is the sweetest I’ll ever taste
And when I awake
I’ll be happy, lifeless, my spirit replaced
And I will never feel
Another useless tear falling down my face
I’ll sell my soul to nothingness
All my fears I will have chased away"
PowerlFull write. You did dark poetry a justice.
Mortis-Dark
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