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Use and Abuse
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:42:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Use and Abuse
Lost consciousness
With the emptiness
Trying to lose
Everything with what you
Use and abuse
Pushing me away
When your consciousness fades
But this is nothing new
First it starts with a few
When you use and abuse
Following the road to its end
Because your ways wouldn't mend
Drowned the blues
With what you do
When you use and abuse
But you never try
To face the demons inside
You'd rather use and abuse
The drugs given to you
And it's me following in your shoes
It's your daughter
Looking up to you
It's your daughter
Not knowing what else to do
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Re: Use and Abuse
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:44:11 PM AEST
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| You know is it not and the children shall lead them..I wonder why it is the Parents lead by poor example..How strong are you to resist this all..Strong feeling here as always dear kitten.. |
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Re: Use and Abuse
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by whispered_cries on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:04:15 PM AEST
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| i think it's very good, nice job. |
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Re: Use and Abuse
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by venkat on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:45:11 AM AEST
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| well done..:-) venkat |
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Re: Use and Abuse
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:50:22 AM AEST
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Its just my opinion, please dont be offended.
I dont like the way you repeat the title, it was the same thing that put me off in the other poem.
But its okay.
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Re: Use and Abuse
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by thecutter on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:59:51 AM AEST
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| great poem. the way the title is repeated just emphasises how strongly you feel about this. |
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