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Negations Breathe A Doubting Breeze
Contributed by
InexactExactness
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Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
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I don't believe in many things
I don't hold true to me
I put this smile on my face
and am content with what I see
I can't throw caution into the wind
I can't seem to do things right
Always one step away from it all
Always two steps from life
I want to have it all right now
I need it all for myself
I have nothing to give back
I'm an ice cube about to melt
I am nothing but a poor blind man
I'm here for the world to see
I'm nothing but a poor mute man
wishing that's all I could be
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2002-12-08 23:00:00]
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Re: Negations Breathe A Doubting Breeze
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:04:53 AM AEST
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This is really good. I really like it. Keep writing, and keep your chin up.
YS |
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Re: Negations Breathe A Doubting Breeze
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:24:40 AM AEST
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I don't beleive in many things anymore either.....beautiful write, my heart is there trust me....
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Re: Negations Breathe A Doubting Breeze
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:27:42 AM AEST
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Hey, I dont understand the title, but it made me curious. I wrote a poem sort of like this one. I liked this poem and i liked the line scheme (or whatever you call it). Good poem and hope to see more of your stuff up soon.
-Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Negations Breathe A Doubting Breeze
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 08:49:20 AM AEST
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Nice work buddy...I know just what you are saying. Well done! Larry
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Re: Negations Breathe A Doubting Breeze
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by LJ on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 02:09:59 AM AEST
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| This is a great write. I really enjoyed it! |
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