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Melodic Disdain
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:44:20 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Melodic Disdain
The chords play
Disdain
The melodies fade
With the frayed
Strings of shame
The fingers play
Misplaced
With the tempo out paced
By meters that race
To be show cased
The chords play
The blame
With an unknown name
Beginning each refrain
With the notes still the same
The fingers play
Ungraced
Outlined what's erased
To get a taste
Of fame
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-02-02 21:44:20]
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Re: Melodic Disdain
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:47:10 PM AEST
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Very diffrent from you here..I loved it.
So diffrent I don't know but this is very good..My my my little kitten has blown my mind tonight with change.. |
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Re: Melodic Disdain
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:03:36 PM AEST
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| I really didnt expact something like this from you but damn its good |
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Re: Melodic Disdain
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:07:55 PM AEST
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a different style here but I enjoyed it
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Re: Melodic Disdain
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:53:08 PM AEST
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awesome write,i'm gonna tell u something thats already been told 3 time and probably more when i'm done,but this was very very different but a different still great style,u make everything a master piece,ur the best love ya,muah
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Re: Melodic Disdain
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:02:27 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this one.
There were pleasant rhymes and the meaning was interesting.
4 *s |
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