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I Should've Known
Contributed by
Elf
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You said you'd never hurt me
Or ever make me cry.
You said you'd never break my heart
Or make me want to die.
You said you'd never leave me
And never let me go.
You told me not to worry,
But now I guess I know.
You promised to never hurt me.
I swear that is a lie.
Inside, my heart is shattered;
And I feel like I could die.
You said you'd never leave me.
But now I am alone.
You swore you'd always love me,
But I guess I should have known.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2005-02-02 21:50:41]
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Re: I Should've Known
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:00:45 PM AEST
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| This is great. I really liked it. The flow was good, and this is something we can all certainly relate to. Excellent work. |
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Re: I Should've Known
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:14:32 AM AEST
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very good yet sad poem I loved how it all
flowed together. I hope you have gotten over
whoever this poem is written to. Thanks for
sharing it I enjoyed reading it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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