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The Sun Shines but I Don't
Contributed by
allforyou
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:49:02 PM in AEST
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I do not weep crocodile tears, but pure, deep distress.
No pollyannaish words will fall out of my mouth.
A misconceived me sours in the sun.
Does anyone else live an infelicitous life?
My contentedness is ambiguous.
My self-induced affliction is not.
This feeling that animates me,
there is no utterance I can speak to describe it.
Do you understand yet?
My reverie is that of someone who possesses a discombobulated mind.
I shudder from anything and everything cheerful.
The sun shines, but I don't.
And that is what ultimately puts me where I am.
In between a knife and a needle, both leading to the grave.
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allforyou
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2005-02-02 22:49:02]
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Re: The Sun Shines but I Don't
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:39:10 PM AEST
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nice write keep it up ur an awesome writer,i give u 5 *s
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Re: The Sun Shines but I Don't
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:24:49 AM AEST
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| "discombobulated" Love that word! I like the lonely standing figure thoughts initiated by this poem. Blessings. |
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