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Should I#2
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:04:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Should i close my eyes
and imagine as time goes by.
can i look at you,
and injoy your smile.
should i inquire, or even ask why?
why, we fight and apologize.
should i just except your cheating ways
or should i look for another on a different day.
what,?what can you say?
no longer will i debate my decision not to stay.
but i wish you long life,
what else can i say.
please injoy the rest of your day.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-02-02 23:04:44]
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Re: Should I#2
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:11:44 PM AEST
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very sad richard, i hope your alright... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Should I#2
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:03:44 AM AEST
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| This is very heartfelt. I think you "accept," not "except" and "enjoy," not "injoy." The rhyme scheme goes well, and "no longer will i debate my decision not to stay" speaks volumes. Blessings. |
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Re: Should I#2
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by Kazzy1231 on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:46:11 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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