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A Single Moment
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:44:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Standing on a hilltop today
I saw the ends of the World.
I closed my eyes,
took in a deep, clean breath of air
and looked even further.
There once was a perfect moment in Time,
from the beginning.
Some people were there
Existing within each other,
Knowing
Feeling
each other's thoughts.
Where blue
was the purest blue
and green hills stretched
out to the ultimate imagination.
There existed a single moment,
just before the fear crept in,
a single moment of remembering
the sounds,
the smells
and the visions of this perfect place.
I smiled upon those blue skies
and green hills
knowing this is the very spot I stood upon
from the beginning
from the perfect moment in Time.
Copyright ©
Nardo
... [
2005-02-03 00:44:45]
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Re: A Single Moment
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:10:29 AM AEST
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| Very lovely, I really enjoyed this. Much peace. |
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Re: A Single Moment
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:45:51 AM AEST
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Utterly beautiful!
'I saw the ends of the World.
I closed my eyes,
took in a deep, clean breath of air
and looked even further.'
Very well-written indeed.
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Re: A Single Moment
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:46:35 PM AEST
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| Good one. Vivid and so colorful. Nice to read your stuff again. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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