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The Fall (Dirt and Hair)
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:25:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The woman fell.
Her hair caught over the twilight.
Her mouth surrounding the(sensation) stars.
Her fingers against the lattice of the house;
(pressing wildly pressing furiously)the lattice of the house scattered
diamonds over the shadow of her gown.
This is the birth newly settled into dust, she whispered,
this is the fallacy(in birth we are caged birds freed).
She closed her eyes swept deeply the dirt and hair
the dirt and hair
of an old knife(old rusty dulling blade) an old knife with dirt and hair
beneath her finger nails.
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iodinelove
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2005-02-03 02:25:03]
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Re: The Fall (Dirt and Hair)
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:32:38 AM AEST
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Very sad but maybe it's about the death of her soul coming back to life.
huggs,
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Re: The Fall (Dirt and Hair)
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by nanonan on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:50:09 AM AEST
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| I see this as something as a cry for help. I see uncertainty, a desire for death, but an understanding that life and death are one in the same... I like this poem a lot... keep it up! |
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Re: The Fall (Dirt and Hair)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:19:47 PM AEST
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this is... oddly beautiful.
your a great writer!
and it doesn't matter what it's about -
it's fun to see how people interpret it!
- Bethani - |
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