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Questioning Reality
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:43:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Passage through time
Riding on a dream
I'm not sure
Just what it all means
Looking in the window
Watching myself act
Afraid of what's seen
Carried on my back
Whispers I hear
Directions in the dark
Confused, all alone
Trying to play this part
Try to seperate reality
from this strange dream
People are never....really
What they seem.
They talk, talk, talk
Never hear the truth
Wouldn't know if it
slapped "em in the face
Standing Screwing
Watching Laughing
I'll take my rightful place.
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deadheadpoet
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2005-02-03 04:43:57]
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Re: Questioning Reality
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:39:50 AM AEST
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| Nice one! |
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Re: Questioning Reality
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:46:07 PM AEST
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u have a way of summitting reallity very artisticaly,
i like reading your poems, u have a gentle way of
saying in your face, very stylish . . .
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Re: Questioning Reality
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:28:52 PM AEST
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| can we say screwing??? I didn't know we could say screwing..rotflmao..hey someone gave you a 2..you got upgraded..congrats!!!! LOL this was a great poem.. a 7 at least.. (if I voted..that's nonthenthe..) |
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Re: Questioning Reality
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:46:19 PM AEST
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great style, expression and flow, laid out beautifully, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Questioning Reality
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:16:01 PM AEST
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Very nice. I can relate to this kind of.
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Re: Questioning Reality
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by GingerB on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:47:29 PM AEST
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Good write. interesting concept.
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