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Good-Bye
Contributed by
Marc
on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hate the fact
that your going away
and i'll never forget
all the words you say
you're special to me
and i don't want to lose you
I love you so much
and i hope you love me too
you say you'll be back
in 3 or so years
and every night of that time
i'll be going to bed in tears.
please don't forget me
or find so one new
because i couldn't handle it
if you loved her too.
your leaving soon
counting down the days
I'll miss you so much
and in soo many ways
well the day has come
your going away
and i'll never forget
this tear filled day.
Copyright ©
Marc
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2002-12-09 03:30:00]
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Re: Good-Bye
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:57:10 AM AEST
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This was a very loving yet sad poem. It is never easy to watch some one you love leave. Your poem was wonderfully expressed.
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Re: Good-Bye
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 02:54:07 PM AEST
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This is so heart felt and touching it gave me tears just reading it, most of my family was in the military like this and i know from the stories my gramma told that it was never easy to say bye to them when they went off....my heart is there....thanks for sharing this one it brings back alot of memories for me....
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:40:26 PM AEST
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Sad but beautiful write....
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