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The pain of body and mind
Contributed by
Marc
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Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It reflects the light
as i bring it to my wrist
alive with fright
i drive it into my skin
my mind screams
all to a blur
thoughts from a dream
i wish never to incur
redness everywhere
life fading fast
can't control it
I know i can't last
blade to the floor
wrist to the sink
closing the door
i can't even think
Copyright ©
Marc
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2002-12-09 04:00:00]
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Re: The pain of body and mind
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:51:05 AM AEST
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Marc, I felt those feelings many, many years ago. I think you did an excellent job on this poem.
Yvonne |
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Re: The pain of body and mind
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 02:56:57 PM AEST
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This is my old home away from home....i used to live in t his dark place every single day .....not to feel but to punish myself...it's a place i don't want to go back to and with the strength i've been given lately i hope i don't have to....thanks for sharing this one it took me back in time...and Marc if you need someone to talk to i dont mind listening my friend.....my heart is right there...
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Re: The pain of body and mind
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:22:53 PM AEST
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Hey. Marc I've been there and have been there quite recently... Thursday in Fact. I liked this poem its so well writte... I felt as if I was there with you. Marc if u ever need to talk I'll be there e-mail me at fartingson@hotmail.com
- Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The pain of body and mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 05:28:04 PM AEST
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| thats awesome "marc" i love ya |
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Re: The pain of body and mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 05:28:07 PM AEST
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| thats awesome "marc" i love ya |
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