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Half Moon (Curse of the Tide)
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:31:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come home, sweet shroud
One more time
around the wrap
Envelope, and imprint crown
Bend and fold
Converge the map
Orchestrate, bended wills
Tie and bind
Spring the trap
Show no mercy, kibbitz
Revolve and punish
Unleash your slap
Construct, cover malice
Cries and tears
Of dew and sap
Leave at nadir, sleep
Hibernate and ponder
Relish your nap
Come 'round, ritual
Sharpen and refine
Your next lap
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2005-02-03 18:31:24]
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Re: Half Moon (Curse of the Tide)
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by Scarlett on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:15:06 AM AEST
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| not sure i understand the content of the poem but i liked some of the images. i think you're very talented! |
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