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Rainbows in the Night
Contributed by
Phantomdream
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:37:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Stars shine silver on the sides of tall, slender, trees,
glittering white, as the night passes.
Day comes, darkness fading in grey,
and clouds consume the sunlit sky.
Thunder cracks like a beating drum,
and rain beats upon the roofs of trees.
Lightning flashes, lighting up the darkened sky,
hitting a tree, it cracks, falling gracefully.
Wind rips through the leaves,
rustling them like cattle,
blowing them away on the breeze.
Waves crash down,
beating away the sand upon the shore.
At first a small ray, but then it grows,
the sun comes out, shining like a star.
Then you see the most intriguing of all,
colors of every hue dancing across the sky,
rainbows glitter from every corner of the Earth.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-02-03 19:37:29]
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Re: Rainbows in the Night
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:39:32 PM AEST
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I really loved this one, it was amazing,
pix xx |
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Re: Rainbows in the Night
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by Arsenic on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:51:14 PM AEST
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Nice freeverse... I wonder what it sounded like in the origional.
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Re: Rainbows in the Night
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:19:16 PM AEST
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| I got some very nice mental pictures while reading this one. Excellent descriptions! Keep it up! |
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Re: Rainbows in the Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:38:15 PM AEST
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| Awesome imagery. Lovely write. :-) |
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