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Black Rose Poison
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:46:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Black Rose Poison
You are my meaning,
My chaotic demon,
My subconscious thoughts,
And the answer I've sought.
These secrets I whisper
While you are asleep.
You'll never know
About the love I keep
In hatred's shadow.
I am the passion that makes you shiver...
Lend your eyes to mine
Just one last time.
Eyes that swallow me up
And spit me out
Deep into the night.
You are my meaning
When I have reason
To see past what you show
And let this love go
For hatred's love.
Singed off our tears.
We stay together in pieces
Built around your maniacal art.
To me youre my masterpiece.
My alteration of you will never cease,
Because you are my creation,
My obsession.
Not another can feed
My soul this emotion.
Tearing me up and kissing
Me down
With hatred's devotion.
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Re: Black Rose Poison
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:50:31 PM AEST
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bravo, that was excellent, amazing and so well penned
pix xx |
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Re: Black Rose Poison
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by Phantomdream on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:01:37 PM AEST
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| *shivers* Ooh, creepy....but well written...I like the title. |
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Re: Black Rose Poison
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:06:58 PM AEST
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| awesome,i liked this,keep it up |
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Re: Black Rose Poison
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:14:21 PM AEST
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I like the way you push the opposites:
For hatred's love.
Tearing me up and kissing
Me down
And of course the title, is excellent and intriguing in everyway. Nicely Chosen:
And this line especially strikes a chord with me:
You are my meaning,
My chaotic demon,
Awesome write. Cheers to both of you! |
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