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Becoming One
Contributed by
Twitch06
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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escape and find a new
world with me, and becoming
one with eachother
living, feeling, and being free
where we live by no rules
and we live on eachothers
beliefs and feelings
living long, living full lives
only those who have
somthing to live for
but those who dont
keep searching for
good quality in life
with you, i can live
a full life, be free and
feel the feeling of love
and you are my chosen one
the one to help me and you
become one, one with life
Copyright ©
Twitch06
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2005-02-03 21:40:17]
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Re: Becoming One
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:51:44 PM AEST
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| Not to bad but some of your words run together, slow down a little before posting. Keep writing... |
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