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Your Stupidity
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:32:43 PM in AEST
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Your Stupidity
Careless with indifference
Hating the passion given
Loving the pain your in
Reciprocated annihilation
Red rivers flow
With flawed reflections
Too weak to forget
The soulless perceptions
Problems are blamed
And how you were raised
The truth is bleeding
From your colorless eyes
But the tears dilute
For complete uselessness
Noteless and discordant
But the vibrations still sounding
Until reasonless disruptions
Stop your heart ache
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-02-03 22:32:43]
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Re: Your Stupidity
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by shelby on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:38:59 PM AEST
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loving the pain your in ohhhhh that sounds so much like someone I know....... this was great so strong and to the point
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Re: Your Stupidity
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:30:31 PM AEST
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| This is such a great write... Damn Your good...Again :) |
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Re: Your Stupidity
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by afterdark on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:03:26 AM AEST
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| Very good wording here ..I really like the way you used certain phrases in this one..Again yes you kitten have done very well.. |
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Re: Your Stupidity
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by killingmehslowly on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:55:27 PM AEST
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| Excellent work. The second stanza really jumps out and calls to me. I love it. Amazing word choices too. |
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