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One Minute
Contributed by
ruthie1983
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:57:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Memory, a good thing unless something bad happens,
You look back at that one minute you could have avoided,
You ask yourself WHY over and over but you never get answers,
Could it have made a difference if you could have said NO?
Could it have made a difference if you were somewhere?
Could it have made a difference if you ignored the situation?
If you could have avoided that one minute from the past,
Memories would not be flooding back to your thinking,
Memories would not be making your life miserable,
If you could have avoided that one minute from the past
Copyright ©
ruthie1983
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2005-02-04 00:57:21]
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Re: One Minute
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by Davinah on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 03:29:13 AM AEST
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| Very true! I can really relate to this poem... Flash backs are awful... Greets, x |
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Re: One Minute
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by vanilla_flame on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:54:35 PM AEST
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awesome write, im sure loads of ppl can relate,
sarah |
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Re: One Minute
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:05:27 PM AEST
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Yepperz...
We all have those minutes... we'd like to forget... when time turned a corner... and changed everything forever.
Another excellent write! Seems though it's not finished.... like there should be more. but that's just me... I exhaust the subject when I write. LOL!
~Donna~ |
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