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A Shallow Abyss
Contributed by
springchic1979
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Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 07:57:16 PM in AEST
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"I have loved and lost, therefore, will not love again!"
And so, thus, you have stated by your own decree
But how does it feel to have an infinite void
That's strategically placed where a heart should be?
You harbor a bottomless hole beneath your breast
That will reverberate sorrow but will not beat.
Will your lonliness be enough to comfort you
When you push away others and admit defeat?
There's a chasm you contain deep inside your chest
Which you painstakingly fill with such selfishness.
With your increasing concern for only yourself
You have reduced your heart to a shallow abyss.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright 2002 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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2002-12-09 19:57:16]
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 08:32:30 PM AEST
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| That is so true..I guess you just have to keep on trying and never give up. Great write! Larry |
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 09:05:04 AM AEST
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Thank you for commenting, Larry, I am glad you understood what I meant. ;)
Yvonne |
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:52:50 PM AEST
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Yvonne, this is excellent; wonderful flow..
hugs Nessa |
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:03:05 PM AEST
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Thank you Nessa :)
*hugs*
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:54:01 PM AEST
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| wow yes, straight to the point and so deftly written |
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:34:53 PM AEST
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You're too sweet Wolfflow, Thank you. :)
Yvonne |
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:24:51 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem but even though you have loved and lost doesn't mean you can't love again!
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Re: A Shallow Abyss
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 07:02:50 PM AEST
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Thank you very much PhantomsBBYgrl.
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