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HOLD ME
Contributed by
CRAZ2
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:35:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hold me till the sun comes up
Hold me by the ocean side
Hold me like you want to be mine
Hold me like the there is no time
Hold me and watch our dreams come true
Hold me while we both turn grey
Hold me till the birds can fly no more
Hold me till the sun doesnt shine
Hold me till the moon doesnt glow
Hold me like there is no tomorrow
Hold me till I breathe no more
For after all this time has passed
I will know we have spent the rest of
Our lives together
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CRAZ2
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2005-02-04 10:35:37]
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Re: HOLD ME
(User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:05:26 PM AEST
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| that was really good, but the pattern needs a little adjustment |
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