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The Affects of a Father
Contributed by
eulo440
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:35:23 PM in AEST
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So the story begins of a tale never told
Of a boy who grew up but never grew old
He was a failure according to his father
Who never gave him a chance
And never took the time to bother
So he was forced into a defensive stance
A stance that degraded him
And made him feel grim
He used to be high on life
And was as sharp as a knife
But as the degrading set in and his dreams were bashed
All of his thoughts clashed
And so he held his head up high
Although it was all just a lie
He began to spend a lot of time thinking
About how much life was a waste
He sadly gained an interest in drinking
And lost all faith in the dreams he once chased
So now he just lies in bed
Wishing he were dead
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Re: The Affects of a Father
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by bibi on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:20:56 PM AEST
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| get up out of that bed a do what makes you feel not what he wants you to. my dad sucked too. |
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