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Good Morning God
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:06:41 PM in AEST
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Good morning God, when did i arrive?
Just a moment ago, i thought i was alive.
I guess that i just stumbled in, in an unexpected manor.
Look at all the pretty things here, this place is filled with glamour.
I was just thinking, did i get to say my goodbyes?
Because i really would have, if i knew that i would die.
Now i feel trapped inside a moment, and time is standing still.
I know i didn't say goodbye, nor did i write my will.
I'd like to tell my family, back down on the earth.
That i am in a better place, where the pain just doesn't hurt.
But it feels good to be here, but that isn't a surprise.
I see such a broad world, and i can open up my eyes.
But im wondering, why i feel i left something behind.
Maybe there's something there that i just didn't find.
Well God goodnight, hope to see you soon.
Tell my family to think of me, when evr they see the moon.
Goodmorning God....
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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2005-02-04 17:06:41]
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Re: Good Morning God
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:34:04 PM AEST
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| This is an interesting little poem. It has a nice idea but I believe if you strung it out a bit more and keep the good morning god thing going it would be better, all the same, This poem has a good premise and very much potential. Keep it up! |
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Re: Good Morning God
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:19:03 PM AEST
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This is really awesome. I have never seen a poem like this. It leaves so much thought to it, I never really thought about what would happen if I died in a sudden death. Really really interesting and awesome. I really like this. It's totally awesome you know.
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Re: Good Morning God
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by UrMyInspiration on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:27:55 PM AEST
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| This is a very lovely written poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing! |
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