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Silver nights, Golden dawn
Contributed by
Maxximus
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:37:29 PM in AEST
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It began a faint star, something precious in the distance
A light by which my nights evermore were captured
I slept with waking thought
Dreamt in daylight reverence
And held pure the voice which brought stillness
To my world
From the beginning so long ago
Never a flicker
Never a hesitation
Never a doubt rung in my mind
Even as words were held
On the tip of a sword
Where golden demons razed
My platinum angel would rise
Sunder the world and all its misgivings
To bring life where only death might linger
It was the life that ran through me once again
Strength to my body
Force to my mind
Iron to a will once corroded
Now blazing as the dawn she did herald
A dawn we could now embrace in unity
She was the flood of inspiration
The hope when the well of my soul had run dry
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Re: Silver nights, Golden dawn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:06:57 PM AEST
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| Very nice dedication. Just lovely. Cheers! |
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Re: Silver nights, Golden dawn
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:40:19 PM AEST
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Where golden demons razed
My platinum angel would rise...
That was good stuff,
it was phrased really well.
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Re: Silver nights, Golden dawn
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:11:01 PM AEST
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Eloquent and inspiring words. Well done! I much enjoyed the theme as well.
Slàn
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