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°°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The only thing i ever searched for in life
Was my soulmate to love me and make me his wife
I wanted his love professed three times fold
And with my soulmate together we would grow old
Now as i grew older, thought i found it twice
The one who stood by me and gave me his life
I felt in my heart that we had became one
I'm Yesterday's fool, now it's over and done..
I heard his words how they spoke to my heart
He said i was beautiful right from the start
His words they were filled with such power and pain
I thought he was different, and i wanted his last name
I felt in my heart that he deeply loved me
But i'm not sure how, with the lies he gave me
I don't know what made him talk through his lies
I beleived in his world, for him i would have died
I wanted to die when i saw what he said..
I wanted to build my own red blood death bed
I expected it from another, but not from his lips
He asked for forgiveness, i even gave him this
I didn't want to sit in the other one's seats
Where i'm titled as a friend that he would need
I couldn't be fake as he asked me to do
But it's just who i am, as yesterday's fool...
It's hard when your lied to, to trust another heart
Other people don't deserve this at all from the start
One lie here and there, and then another one to boot
It's a lesson well learned, that's why i prefer truth
I hope one day he finds honesty and truth
I will always refer to him as ..."Tyaboo"...
I don't know why things happen the way that they do
But if you run across a liar, don't be like me...
Yesterday's Fool...
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-12-09 22:15:00]
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Elisabeth on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:24:13 PM AEST
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| Neat poem...sorry about what happened to you. Hope you find the Mr. Right. Third time is a charm, right? |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:29:03 PM AEST
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Oreo,I really feel for you,theres someone special for you out there,because you have such a warm heart! Those others were just
to make you stronger & wiser for when that true one comes along! Best always! Christina |
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 11:08:18 PM AEST
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| Oreo, what a sad but powerful write, he didn't deserve you anyways, sorry he treated you so wrong, we love you here, so don't ever leave us, have a wonderful Christmas season, and may you find peace through Our Lord, |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 11:17:43 PM AEST
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nice write Oreo straight from the heart as always.. i know what it is like to be lied too i have experienced it often enough myself but life goes on right and us girls just gotta stick together through thick and thin good luck in all you do be well girlfriend
peace, love and happy poetry |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Chanti on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 04:31:57 PM AEST
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Very meaningful write, Oreo. Sometimes relationships hurt, and others they dont. We never know if love is leading us the right way.... or leading us to a dead end. Im sure that you will find someone who will cherish being with you every minute. Thanks for sharing you amazing talent.
~* Dont contemplate the future... Dont dwell on the past.*~
-Chanti
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:46:19 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really good. I really, really, really like this. I cried. You brought the waterworks. And I felt like you pulled me into the poem. Maybe it's because I've been "yesterday's fool", but you made it seem like I was living those lies too. I really like this.
YS |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Smooth on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 04:46:10 PM AEST
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The more of your poetry I read, the more I see myself in you, we have some of the same ideals and principles. For me it is almost impossible to forgive a lie, I don't understand the why of it all, so forgiving even one is difficult to say the least. I have had my heart broken more times than I can count, but the romantic in me won't let me stop trying. Searching for her, seeking the one who believes like I do in honor and truth, is that so much to ask? This poem blew me away, I loved it, the message, the pain, the way you painted the emotions with your pen. I truly enjoy the way you write, thank you so much for sharing and for all your encouragement to others. Face it, you're just a softy. lol
Smooth
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:55:29 AM AEST
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Hello OreO,
This is a very good poem... Sometimes ppl are just that way... It's a shame! Nevertheless good write.
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Haligh on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:46:44 PM AEST
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wow. i know exactly what this is like. :-
good poem..it really affected me.
:sigh: hopefully we both eventually find someone... |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by spooky on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 10:50:57 PM AEST
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| your no fool,,he was ,,for letting you go,,his lose is your gain,,it wasn't suppose to be ,,he is out there somewhere,, you'll find him,, just believe |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 04:17:48 PM AEST
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Truth is what creates life, life is what people strive to maintain and conquer over. So then why is it that people feel as though they must lie? It's pointless if you ask me. The truth always prevails and even if it hurts, nothing can hurt as much as an awful surprise from a person you've grown fond of. I'm sorry that happened to you. I'm always here for ya so keep your chin up :)
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by 15caitlin15 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:37:57 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. And I'm sure everybody has gone through a situation where they were "Yesterday's Fool"...
Caitlin |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:53:36 PM AEST
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Dear OreO @-<-<<-
Yeah... I had a prevaricator in my life too; actually several lol.. personally I could care less if they find honesty and truth; or stick their heads in the tolit for pleasure.. I am much happier now and hope you find that one true soul who makes your life complete also:)
Your writing friend always Nessa |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:48:49 PM AEST
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| ok, i know its supposed to be sad, but the clever lines made me smile. well written! jim aka darkeyedman |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by dude on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:20:18 PM AEST
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| nice write. The words are well written, point is clearly made and you feelings are sincerly felt. I really like it. unfortunatly, everyone of us has to be a "yesterday fool" in order to be "todays truth" |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:35:02 PM AEST
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I stood before truth and bared my soul
as the lies before me have taken their toll.
A very good read.
wordsy. |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Damien on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:32:06 AM AEST
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Hi OreO,
That was another very good poem.I just saw the number of people who read your poems and the number of comments posted.I am sure you deserve each and every one of those complements.Keep coming out with more poems.
Ajit. |
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Re: °°°Yesterday's Fool°°°
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by Damien on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:32:21 AM AEST
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Hi OreO,
That was another very good poem.I just saw the number of people who read your poems and the number of comments posted.I am sure you deserve each and every one of those complements.Keep coming out with more poems.
Damien |
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