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Beautiful Rose
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Beautiful Rose
Glistening
In the rain
With the sun
Piercing through
The clouds
You keep me
Guessing
Beautiful Rose
I will never
Be able to touch,
The storm you
Have brewed
To keep me at bay...
Is to much
Beautiful Rose
With razor sharp
Thorns
To you my beauty
That wont let me
Hold
Will you accept
My love
To which I pledge
To never
Run cold
Beautiful Rose
You
I will never
Hold
Brewing Storm
My heart which
You have
Torn
Wilting pedals
Killing
The love
I wished to
Grow
Beautiful Rose
To which
My love
You will never
Know
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-04 21:53:56]
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Re: Beautiful Rose
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by cherrycoke on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:23:35 PM AEST
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| great poem .. i like how you personified the rose .. you've definitely got talent .. keep writing |
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Re: Beautiful Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:39:52 AM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Beautiful Rose
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:00:20 PM AEST
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| you wrote of a beautiful rose, and what you have is an amazingly beautiful poem. i cant express my liking for this one, its too great for words to express. |
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