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Earth
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Clouds stand on the morning,
the dancing laugh of desire,
a blissful kiss of dew,
touch Earth's old lips.
Rays gently spread wide,
the mournful note of death,
a daring choir of birds,
play for her deaf ears.
Leaves of gold drop slowly,
the taste of ice cold air,
a delicious bite of spring,
draw summer to her mouth.
Wounds painfully aquired,
the smell of rotting flesh,
a smile from the darkness,
gouge deep into her skin.
Doubts uncut from the world,
the venemous arrows of deceit,
memories of dreams and scant youth,
blindly poise ready demons of jealousy
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Phantomdream
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2005-02-04 23:29:26]
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Re: Earth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:39:22 AM AEST
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Great imagery!
"a blissful kiss of dew,
touch Earth's old lips."
Love that part. |
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Re: Earth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:55:20 PM AEST
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| HAH!!!!! You forgot to say thanks...I SO totally helped you write that 20 word poem...but, you're welcome. COnsider this your bday present. |
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