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Ill Be Forever Cursed
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:44:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I cried out for someone to help me, no ones there
So i did that only thing i could, making the pain stop
Looking at the ceiling, pushing the blade into me
I cried out alone , cause alone is all ill ever be
With burdining everyones pain, theres no one there to help me with me
This whole life proves im cursed, always hurting, no one can help
Alone in the dark, sad music playing, im tormented by thoughts of suicide
Consumed by pain and fear, why cant i feel anythign but pain?
im just screaming for someone to understand
Why i cant love, why i cant be happy, feels like im dead inside
Completly alone, everything is killing me inside
With outside stress i cant take, Im just a kid with life and pain of an adult
Why cant anyone feel my pain, im so cheated in life
I should just be alone, everything hurts so much, with my broken heart
Lied to, burdining everyones pain, i cant be happy, i cant love
Ill always be alone, and no one can understand
Im only here to stop otheres pain, with no one to help me with my own
This is what god has cursed me with, but why?
What did i do to deserve this? no one should have to endure this pain
Why am i, forever cursed?
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Re: Ill Be Forever Cursed
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:29:46 AM AEST
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hm..not bad...you don't have much form to it. and it kinda jumps around here and there in some spots. lots of emotions, and you kept to the title, the whole 'being cursed' and all, pretty good ending too...
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