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Final Kiss
Contributed by
crash
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Seventeen years old
not even done with school
always degrading himself
the sensless fool
He once was a great kid
good grades and hundreds of friends
He didn't realise it
but any pain eventually ends
He always said that his greatness
was gone, it was through
I told him it would get better
He'd reply **** you
After she left
it didn't take long
towards the end
he only talked with his bong
He took to the drugs
he wrote his poems and drank his beer
though we were all his friends
we never dared to go near
then one day
he didn't come home
So I searched the places
we once roamed
I found him in the woods
most of the blood drained fro his wrist
he held a note that said
"embrace the blade's final kiss"
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crash
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2005-02-05 09:39:04]
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Re: Final Kiss
(User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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What a sad dark poem, you have writen this so well. May you find peace soon.
Jane x |
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Re: Final Kiss
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:52:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful piece, good job. |
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