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Hiccups
Contributed by
allforyou
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 04:03:01 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Hiccups jump out of my throat, as you stare into my soul. I'm so nervous when I'm around you. Yeah, it was only a minute you were near, but it was a short eternity to me, and I fear that your eyes see right through me. And I wonder, am I who you want more than anyone else? Because that's what you mean to me. I can't even say anything, I just smile, and trying to think, my mind's denial, of giving me something to talk about. Nothing. I hear you speak one word, and still it echoes through my head. That single word that you had said, made my day so much better. Just thinking of you, hiccups jump out of my throat.
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Re: Hiccups
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:05:53 PM AEST (User
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Cute write. It made me smile :-) |
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Re: Hiccups
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:39:30 PM AEST (User
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Cute write. It could have been better in some places but it was good. Thanks for sharing. |
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