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Falling Apart
Contributed by
Vistar
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:31:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I walk
I smile
I laugh, and
I sigh
I scream, and
I shout, and
I break down and cry
I'm smart, and
I'm strong, and
I'm perfect, and good
I'm dumb, and
I'm weak, and
Don't do what I should
I'm immortal
I feel pain
I'm sober
I'm insayne
Could someone just help me?
I am faint of heart
Pull me together, or
I'll fall apart
Copyright ©
Vistar
... [
2005-02-05 17:31:13]
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Re: Falling Apart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:34:49 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point. A poem full of irony. Great work! |
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Re: Falling Apart
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by xMizeriex on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:48:04 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, I enjoyed reading this.
Bx |
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Re: Falling Apart
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:23:58 AM AEST
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| Short and to the point, more poems should be like that. Great job! |
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