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Sadness and Sorrow
Contributed by
EmotionalSorrow
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sadness has taken over me
Sorrow got me in great pain
It wont even let me be
So I cant regain
*****
I am now in great depression and woe
I will never be great
And now before I go
I want to see my fate.
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EmotionalSorrow
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2005-02-05 20:46:21]
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Re: Sadness and Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:55:36 PM AEST
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| very nice write. |
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Re: Sadness and Sorrow
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:12:52 PM AEST
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| work on grammar. this would be better longer. |
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Re: Sadness and Sorrow
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by subchild on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:42:03 PM AEST
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| lONGER WOULD have been so much nicer..It is a bit rough to. |
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Re: Sadness and Sorrow
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by EmotionalSorrow on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:08:24 PM AEST
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| I see that two of you hate me. |
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