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New Life
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:40:29 PM in AEST
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New Life
The white rose
Dripping in water
Held by those above
The black rose
Soaked in blood
Is what you hold
The red rose
Dripping in tears
Held by your beloved
The thorns adorn
Your head from what you said
The thorns
Glisten in the mourn
With your heart torn
And hatred born
I hold the black rose
That you've left behind
Death is what you chose
And the red rose dies
But the white rose is given life
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Re: New Life
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:45:07 PM AEST
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You're poems have seemed to relate to mine real closely lately... Another great write for you Jinnifer, you never fail to bring a new picture to my mind... :)
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Re: New Life
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:56:05 PM AEST
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Profoundly powerful write. I am lacking for more to say at this time.
The Voice
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Re: New Life
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:24:50 AM AEST
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| Wow this poem made me think about everything. Great write! Kind of like the protector. |
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Re: New Life
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 07:58:26 AM AEST
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| Very profound...powerful expression..Venkat |
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Re: New Life
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by subchild on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:30:00 PM AEST
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| An amazing poem..So much here to say it seems.. |
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Re: New Life
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:26:28 PM AEST
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The rose has many faces....many meanings.
You've touched on them all here I think.
Very well done
Roses( color of your choice)
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