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Exodus
Contributed by
daniel
on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
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look back on the pages left untouched
taking space
the story dwells inside the dust
but that's not for long
the end of my ride
thinking each mistake
is left in the darkness
and wishing i could take
something i...
well what could i do
and now the dawn has left me out
in my mess
still stuck in the corner unfound
i'm getting out
i'm getting out
so starting again
not knowing direction
the if only then's
don't need my affection
holding the mess comes before
letting it go
getting out...
***
(12/9/02)
Copyright ©
daniel
... [
2002-12-10 02:20:00]
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Re: Exodus
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 02:28:00 AM AEST
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This is beautiful danialo....I enjoy reading your lyrics, your a good song writer...one day i have faith that your lyrics will be famous...thanks for sharing your talent...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Exodus
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:47:22 PM AEST
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I love your lyrics. I enjoy writing lyrics myself. I agree. One day your lyrics will be noticed and you will be loved for the wonderful emotion put into them.
Hope to see more of your work in the future.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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