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A Dream that Killed
Contributed by
LostInLife
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:00:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I fall asleep tonight
Lonely and broken
The world around me is silent
I hear your voice in my head
Calling out my name
I see you from a distance
Looking at me
I walk up to you
And gently grab your hand
I kiss your soft lips
Then I say the words "I love you"
We start to walk as I hold your hand
We walk by the places we used to go
Where we loved and had fun
We stop and look each other in the eye
I wrap my arms around you and kiss you one last time
For I know you will leave
You start to walk away from me into the darkness
Your gone
I wake up
Knowing this was all a dream
Knowing you will never be with me again
I take the razorblade
And carve it deep in my wrist
The blood drips to the ground
All the pain washes away from my body
As I'm about to fall asleep
I see your beautiful face
The dream that killed me
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2005-02-06 01:00:33]
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Re: A Dream that Killed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:36:59 AM AEST
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| your ending was very original. i commend you on this one. |
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Re: A Dream that Killed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:19:25 AM AEST
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| i also commend u on this 1, altho i wouldnt say the ending was original, not on this site anyway. i think its a great poem tho, not only cos i had this. drempt of a friend, realising only 20 mins after i woke up that no, actually i wasnt goin to see her anytime soon. but its good. u captured it well. |
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