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to be loved
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:49:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i want to be loved by you
but im not in your house
im not in your bed
because im not in your head
i know im not loved
i crave to be held with effection
to be kissed with passion
but that can never be
since you...
will never love me
im trying to speak
but you cant hear my voice
on the other side of the ocean
i can see you standing
i'll swim to you
only for you to push me back under
drowning me in my tears
my heart beating forever waiting for you to beat back
i can see it in your eyes
pity for me
and in mine shine love
since that you dont love me
should i turn and run
or stand and fight
this world on my own
face eternity alone
and without you,my future will be unknown
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2005-02-06 11:49:59]
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Re: to be loved
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:07:45 PM AEST
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My heart reaches out to you. When I was reading this I could see myself, waiting for someone who does not love me, and probably never will. I know what you feel, I know that pain because I feel it to. Good write. Keep it up.
::Elizabeth:: |
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