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Holding Hands With My Past
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 12:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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For too long have I befriended my past,
Allowing it to cause a shadow that lasts,
It haunts me as it knows I am weak,
All around my soul it often creeps.
If I felt strong enough I wouldve left it behind,
As it has ravaged me & not been too kind,
I have made too many excuses I need to breathe,
I have to be strong & force the past to leave.
It is breaking my now brittle bones,
Please past let me now finally be alone,
We share nothing any more,
With you I am about to settle all my scores.
You backed me into a corner now Ill attack,
I am about to give you some of the hurt back,
I will not risk losing the man I hold in my heart,
For too long have you made beating me into an art.
Fear is what made me hold onto you for so long,
I thought it was so right, yet it is so wrong,
It has all but killed my love & all we built,
I am beginning to cut you out of my patch work quilt.
I set you sailing down my long river,
I need a true friend, not an Indian giver,
No apologies will I lay down for you,
As you sat back & watched as your plague grew.
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pixie
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2005-02-06 12:18:46]
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by bernard on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 12:32:12 PM AEST
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| Great write Pixie. You have found the secret. Let the past take care of itself it is the future what counts. Keep smiling love from bernard. |
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:08:45 PM AEST
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Super write, Pixie
Bravo! I hear you saying you are going to run your life, rather then you life running you. Buy putting things into perspective, you can de-fang your demons.
Great work
Willofree
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by english-pea-pelter on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 02:33:17 PM AEST
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well done pixie! great job in holding on. let the past correct itself. i have had hard times too. i know how hard it is to just hang on.
luv,
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 02:44:19 PM AEST
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Kriss this is such a sad write, it's well writen and the ryming was perfect like always.
Great write and i hope to read more.
Jane x |
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:16:41 PM AEST
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| awesome write, i too am fighting w/ my past for loves sake, Great work. |
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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beautful peice of poetry this topic always hit's home 4 me, i'll never let go of my past, the world was realer and friendlier then, lovely pixie . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Holding Hands With My Past
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:14:42 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, the past is what usually can get you down. But you can do it.
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