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But You Just Didn't
Contributed by
Val
on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I looked at you and smiled the other day,
I thought you'd see me but you didn't.
I said "I love you" and waited for what you'd say,
I thought you'd hear me but you didn't.
I asked you to come outside and play ball with me,
I thought you'd follow me but you didn't.
I drew a picture just for you to see,
I thought you'd save it but you didn't.
I made a fort for us back in the woods,
I thought you'd camp with me, but you didn't.
I found some worms n' such for fishing if we could,
I thought you'd want to go but you didn't.
I needed you just to talk to, my thoughts to share,
I thought you'd want to but you didn't.
I told you about the game, hoping you'd be there,
I thought you'd surely come but you didn't.
I asked you to share your youth with me,
I thought you'd want to but you couldn't.
My country called me to war, you asked me
to come home safely,
But I didn't.
Copyright ©
Val
... [
2002-12-10 04:00:00]
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Re: But You Just Didn't
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by Roshie on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 04:58:14 AM AEST
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| awwww :(... this is a great write! :) |
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Re: But You Just Didn't
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:28:57 AM AEST
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| This was so sad very well done here very touching! Christina |
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Re: But You Just Didn't
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by Ophelia on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:17:48 PM AEST
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| Well it gave me goose bumps and brought tears to my eyes!!! This was a very heartfelt poem. Great work!!!!!! |
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