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Public humiliation
Contributed by
crazylady
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:53:32 PM in AEST
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Feeling as ive
never felt before
ready to die
the humility from the night befor
it kills me quickly
yet so slow
please just tell me why
so then ill know
cutting and slashing
my wrists to shreds
praying and wishing
for my life to end
but before i go
ill say one final farewell
good riddence to the world
and i hope you burn in hell
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crazylady
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2005-02-06 15:53:32]
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Re: Public humiliation
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:27:30 PM AEST
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| Man...I'd be so horrified if my privates life were announced to the public. Good write. |
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Re: Public humiliation
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:42:17 PM AEST
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And you still call this guy your "DAD"?
But I do understand why he did it...
Maybe thinking that if he humiliated you enough, you would stop...
I would'nt expect this to be the last time he does it...
Good write though
Clark |
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Re: Public humiliation
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by breny on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:17:02 PM AEST
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i've never been humiliated in public like this but i can relate very well to the anger you have towards him because i have this anger towards my dad. great write and you express your emotions very well through this poem.
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Public humiliation
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:42:38 PM AEST
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| Wow, I get mad/humiliated when my parents tell people they know about my cutting. I would be mortified if it was announced in a room full of strangers! Good luck, and be safe. Good write. |
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Re: Public humiliation
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by movax on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:32:35 PM AEST
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| Geez, that's a horrible thing you're Dad did. Feck him |
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