|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A Faded Love
Contributed by
night_child
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
|
Holding him
But letting him slip away
Many oceans that seperate our love
Fading gently
Into the gray waves
I can see your face
Knowing that no matter what I do
We will turn our backs and walk away
Into our own ways of life
You will no longer be a part of me
I walk along this ground
Hidden by the trees
Protecting me from knowing
Knowing how this all will end
Sunlight glittering on fresh tears
Waiting as I look into the never ending world
You fingers slip
Falling so fast
My heart falls with you
I know
I know it's happening
I'm powerless to stop it
What has happened to this beauty
To this world I had created
It dies in my arms
As your love
Dies within my heart
I close my eyes and wish
Wish that this was a world of never ending
Eternal love
Knowing all to well
Such a place does not exist
A porous heart that still feels pain
Life behind a cold mask
Trusting no one
Loving one
Copyright ©
night_child
... [
2005-02-06 16:03:37]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A Faded Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:20:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this reminded me of a lot of the stuff i've written myself. what stunned me was the completely different way u delivered it. This was really able to pull me right into your state of mind here and I loved the words you've chosen to help convey such strong emotions. Really great write |
|
|
Re: A Faded Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:26:59 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
SORRY ABOUT WHAT YOU'RE GOING THRU!BUT YOU'VE EXPRESSED IT VERY WELL IN THIS GREAT PIECE OF POETRY YOU'VE TRACED RIGHT FROM YOUR HEART!!PLEASE TAKE CARE!!!
DAN!!!! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
