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Holding My Breath
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:13:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't see you, but I feel you there
Out there
Running through the darkness.
I sense
Your loneliness, desperation;
There's panic in your voice.
You're screaming inside,
But no one else hears the noise.
I worry,
I am afraid for where you are, who you are.
At this moment in time, I hold my breath
And a million thoughts flood my mind
And i am sure it is the same for you
And you don't know
That I am worrying, as are they,
Here, in the warmth, in the safety of this place.
Come back, you must come back;
It is too dark, too lonely out there,
It is too cold in the night
To be alone.
She will find you, bring you back,
You cannot leave us.
We are all a family here, no one can leave,
No one can leave still crying, still dying inside.
Lift up your head, your face,
Show the world your eyes, your pretty green eyes
And as the crystals fall from them, I feel for you.
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Re: Holding My Breath
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:40:01 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful... |
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Re: Holding My Breath
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:12:40 AM AEST
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A PRETTY POEM!YOU MUST BE A VERY CARING PERSON TO WRITE SOMETHING SO NICE!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Holding My Breath
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:37:35 AM AEST
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has a feeling of hoplessness and alot of pain.
char, this was so awesome. beautiful work as always my friend :)
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