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The Messy Room
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:21:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Crying, Stomping, Pounding, Screaming
A child in her room.
You cant come out, mommy says,
Until you clean your room.
Crying, Stomping, Pounding, Screaming
This child in her room.
Cynthi Mitsy Voujde,
A girl of more than two.
She stomped and screamed inside her room
Not knowing what to do.
She looked around her messy room
Theres way too much to do!
She stomped and screamed and cried and cried
Until her breath was gone.
Im not sure where to start.
Dont send my toys back to Taiwan!
She cried and cried until she slept
In that messy room.
She hadnt touched a toy,
She hadnt moved a shoe.
When she woke to her mommys voice
She looked and saw her room
This could not be that room of hers
The room that made her gloom!
Her mommy was so proud of her
Results she hadnt foreseen.
Cynthi thought with all her might
How her room had gotten clean
It wasnt until bedtime
Before she left for dreamland
She saw the note left on her bed
From a faire in a far off land.
I heard you cry, the faire wrote
About your messy room.
So I came to help you clean
And go back to the fun you knew.
Cynthi was so amazed,
Thered been a faire in her room.
And as the note read on to say,
Cynthi followed to her doom.
I dont like it when little girls cry
So I came to help you.
But I wont visit again,
I only came to show you.
There is a floor to your room
And if you keep it clean
Youre mommy wont ever yell at you,
Thats just what I mean.
Little did Cynthi know
That her mom so kind
Had been the one to write the note
To catch the childs eye.
Now her room stays ever clean
And everyday she tries
To get the faire to come back
Until the day she dies
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2005-02-07 00:21:59]
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Re: The Messy Room
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:47:13 AM AEST
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Beautifully done....
Jenni |
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Re: The Messy Room
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:09:52 AM AEST
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| Well since I have three of my own Boys who DONT clean a thing! This works for me! Loved it! Christina |
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Re: The Messy Room
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:17:48 AM AEST
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| Long deep dark and descriptive, so much sorrow, excellent poem. |
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Re: The Messy Room
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:02:12 AM AEST
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Cute write. I enjoyed it.
Reminds me of myself when I was little and stubborn. :-) |
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