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Untitled for now
Contributed by
Dec2three198five
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:34:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I constantly think about us and why we are different.
Maybe it was something I said or what I didn't.
You caught my eye on our first day in highschool,
The thought of us together would be so cool.
When I see you with other guys,
On the outside I smile but on the inside I cry.
You're so beautiful and there's MUCH MORE I want you 2 know,
But when it really comes down 2 it, the thought of you makes my face glow.
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2005-02-07 00:34:34]
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Re: Untitled for now
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:02:46 AM AEST
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tis ok.....the 2 thing annoys me(t's just me). It's a worthy first attempt....indeed, a very good first--I never use the word indeed-it's pugnacious...don't you think? Keep writing ^_^
always, abraham |
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Re: Untitled for now
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by Tear-Drop-Kisses on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:18:25 AM AEST
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Ohhh I luff the way this is turning out..its cute :P
Rika |
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Re: Untitled for now
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:04:35 AM AEST
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| Henry!! I'm so glad u finally posted it! It's a great first poem...keep writing!! Tanya |
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