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i waited . . .
Contributed by
catz77
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:47:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i waited and you didnt come
i stood there watching for your car
my bags were packed and
your face wasnt there
i coudnt stand it i was only 7
you couldve come but mother lied
she said you were alive but you died
she thought it was best if i didnt know
but it hurt and i didnt let it show
i waited and you didnt come
for years would pass
as my tears fell fast
6 years to be exact
when she finally told me fiction from fact
i cried every night because
i waited and you didnt come
(by the way this hassnt happened to me but its my fear)
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Re: i waited . . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:58:39 AM AEST
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| This is very very Deep, and alot of emotions..all and all Great Write ~ |
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Re: i waited . . .
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by Atari on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:04:17 AM AEST
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WOW! I got the chills when I read that... My mom was kind of like that but she didn't die! She just never showed up...nor did she ever care! I nearly cried! Thanks for that! ~Wonderful write!
You have a knack!
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Re: i waited . . .
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:40:31 AM AEST
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| good write but dont waste time waitin |
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Re: i waited . . .
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by vanilla_flame on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:57:10 PM AEST
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Very good write, worded very well
It's I can only write poems from my expierence, well I tried it once, kinda turned out dark and creepy, well enough with my blabbering
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