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ESCAPE
Contributed by
thecutter
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:39:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If I slice my wrist
and take the pain
i know that im
not insane
it feels so good
my worries go
in one clean hit
in one clean blow
the blood it bleeds
into the sink
i thought long and hard
i had to think
the cut is deep
i fall asleep
i hope i never wake
What ive done
it isnt wrong
i havent made a mistake
In my dream
i am so happy
i havent done anything bad
what ive done
is protect myself
so i never feel sad
I hear a noise
it sounds like crying
I hear someone shout,
Is he dying?
I open my eyes
I am alive
I really wish
I didnt survive
Copyright ©
thecutter
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2005-02-07 07:39:31]
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Re: ESCAPE
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:00:53 AM AEST
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| Full on flowing with pain, vivid and clear words, full of deep meaning, excellent poem. |
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Re: ESCAPE
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:47:04 AM AEST
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| Absolutely wonderful!! Terrrific. I can completley relate. If you wanna talk leave a message, tell your friend great write. |
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Re: ESCAPE
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by unluckicharmz on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:53:29 PM AEST
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| wow i really like this i have poems like this but this thing wont let me post more than three a day! check out the ones i have already alright!!! thanks for the inspiration |
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Re: ESCAPE
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:46:52 PM AEST
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Don't you wish EVERYONE thought nothing of cutting...I hate having to hide my arms...thanks for sharing the poem..i love it
--Kara |
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